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¶ Si subito nostrum ludendo vertimus ensem /
Sic capiti ut palmis ludendo nocere valemus.

¶ Quamvis me teneas manibus / quid proderitur. Hac te
Cuspide percutiam vultum scindendo madentem.

This is a cruel exchange of thrusts: A more deceptive thrust than this cannot be made in the art. You attacked me with the point and I have given you this; And I can make more secure it by dodging out of the way.	[20b-c] Aquesto e de punta un crudelle schambiar In l'arte piu falssa punta de questa non se'p^o'far Tu me trasisti de punta e questa io t'o dada E piu seguro se po far schivando la strada
Because of your hilt, which I have in my hand, I will mark you with my point in your face.	[20b-d] Per tuo mantigner che io in mia man tegno Cum la punta in lo volto io te faço segno

¶ If we suddenly turn our sword in the swordplay,

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 This is a cruel exchange of thrusts:<br/>
-In the art, a more deceptive thrust than this cannot be made.&emsp;<br/>
+A more deceptive thrust than this cannot be made in the art.&emsp;<br/>
 You attacked me with the point and I have given you this;<br/>
-And I can make more secure it by voiding out of the way.
+And I can make more secure it by dodging out of the way.
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-Because of your hilt, which I hold in my hand,<br/>
+Because of your hilt, which I have in my hand,<br/>
-I will make you bleed with my point in your face.
+I will mark you with my point in your face.
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