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{{par|b}} Here, I have thrust through your forehead with a bloody wound,
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✅{{par|b}} In these circumstances, I have pierced your forehead with a bloody wound,
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because during the time<ref>Accusative of duration of time</ref> of giving this [wound], I covered myself with a fleeting cover.
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because I defend this infliction with a swift cover of myself.
  
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{{par|r}} You should mock me with your voice and [definitely] call me blind,
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✅{{par|r}} You would mock me with your voice and you will have to call me blind,
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If your sword doesn't fall to the ground, once I catch it by the hilt<ref>If this your sword, which I catch openly by [its] hilt doesn't fall to the ground.</ref>
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If your sword, which I have clearly caught by the hilt, does not drop to the ground<ref>The original tenses are present and future, but preterite and present flow better in English and provide the same timing</ref>.
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Then you [definitely]<ref> the translator seems to use the imperative to describe a definitive state</ref> remain bare.
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Afterwards, you will have to<ref> the translator seems to use the future imperative to describe a definitive state</ref> remain denuded [of your weapon].
  
 
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Latest revision as of 19:41, 27 May 2025

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Latin 11r

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Hic ego sanguineo percussi vulnere frontem.
Hoc quia me texi volucri cum tegmine dantem.



Derideas me voce tua / cecumque vocato /
Si tuus hic ensis / capulo quem prendo patenter
Non cadet in terram. nudus tu deinde maneto

Italian

[13b-b] Aqui io t'o ferido in la tua testa
Per la coverta ch'i'o fata acosi presta

Here I have struck you in your head
Because of the cover that I have made so quickly.


[13b-c] Per la mane ch'i'o posta sotto tuo elzo
Si tua spada non va in terra dime guerzo.

Because of the hand that I have put beneath your hilt,
If your sword doesn't go to the ground, call me squint-eyed.

English 11r


✅ In these circumstances, I have pierced your forehead with a bloody wound,
because I defend this infliction with a swift cover of myself.

✅ You would mock me with your voice and you will have to call me blind,
If your sword, which I have clearly caught by the hilt, does not drop to the ground[1].
Afterwards, you will have to[2] remain denuded [of your weapon].

  1. ↑ The original tenses are present and future, but preterite and present flow better in English and provide the same timing
  2. ↑ the translator seems to use the future imperative to describe a definitive state
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